How my feelings change:
I´m surprised how the book goes on and a bit shocked about Sam and Alicia getting a baby. I find the parents of Alicia react to hard to them. But maybe Sam´s mother only know this situation from her own past and understands how this two teens feel.
Which question(s) I would like to direct at a particular character in the novel:
Sam, do you want to get the baby now or not? And do you love Alicia again?
What I am confused about (events or characters):
I find it needless for Sam to go to Hastings. It´s to much for the story and a bit boring to read. It´s confusing how fast it goes with Sam´s mother and Mark.
How I as the author would have changed the book:
They find Sam in Hastings and bring him home. Alicia don´t talk with him. Anytime Sam is so wondering if he get a baby that he visit her. He found´s out that Alicia does´nt get a baby, the test was negative.
Images/pictures I liked:
- Sam compare hisself with someone who is at the bottom of a sea and the surface is a long way away and there are sharks coming at you..., when his mother goes with him to the cinema and eating pizza.
- Sam feels like a spectator in a stadium when people are running the 10,000 metres in the Olympics when he listens to a talk between his parents.
- Sam is in Hastings and can´t sleep, because he has too much blood in his face.
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please read your entry again and remember: he, she, it, das -s- muss mit!
I think (not I find)
these two teens
too much for the story
don't change the tense in How I as the author... stay in present
compares himself
and they eat pizza
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